The Swirling Dervish
I thought I was on the path
delving deep inside, within
where dervishes swirled
to the tune of a mystical mind....
I thought I had left behind
the debris of drunken desires
and moulted into a soul divine
taking to flights, so unimaginable....
I thought I had broken free
of bonds beyond reason
of love without a season
only to soar with passion, so unreasonable....
And now here I lie again, delving deep within
trying to mend broken beams of light
carefully cupping hope and love
in the cracked crucible of life, though so imperfect....
posted by Pincushion @ 9:10 PM
7 comments
7 Comments:
a deep poem. one to mull over. one full of angst and anguish but enough of that...so good to see you back here again!
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Thank you so much CJ! Its such an unexpected pleasure to see that you haven't given up on me...that you still visit the site after all this time..I am so touched! Thank you :)
Stumbled upon your blog and read this post. It struck common chords with a post had written titled point-to-point.
Hey Cushion
It's like searing fire that refuses to give in.
Only you could potray it such.
Anj.
Finally-you write and my luck that i decided to go to your blog today in the hope that i would read you :)
keep writing Pincushion..dont ever stop
WHOOOOA!
Heyyyy Gorgeouss! How have you beeen ? Its been suchhhh a loong time! So goood to see you back!What can i say about the poem ? It's like a concentrated potion shrunk with emotions! Let it go and expand to become light!
Hi Pins!
deep, serious, passionate
lovely writing I can picture and feel- nicely done poem
I've popped in here from time to time. Am glad you're writing. (My computer crashed so my poems are not reposted. Artwork is and only three other prose posts.)
I use my original blogname of "Gel" now, not SilvermOOn.
Super to see your writing! Are you still into your art? I hope so. :D
Artistically,
Gel { * * }
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