Mischief!
Diving into the blue
glass sky; riding
desperate laughter
mesmerised and
shy; life a vagabond,
a trip of ecstacy;
a sublime sigh,
a lovers tiff; a tear
licked off the lips;
a French kiss; a jagged
cliff…
life playing mischief!
posted by Pincushion @ 6:34 PM
15 comments
15 Comments:
This definitely has a spark to it. and nice rhythm too. Yeah, you mischievous thing-that was good! :)
Like the chaos in this one, like the chaos of my day today.
french kisses always rock. =)
Ahhh,a beautiful one this brimming with playfullness and tenderness..about life playing mischief!
hugs
"riding
desperate laughter
mesmerised and
shy;"
Loved this line! :-)
What a wonderful life..you are not on ecstacy pill are you ?? LOL!!!!
Love is all a mad dance of honey and tears, but without it who feels alive. I love the pictures what program did you do them on? I cant draw with my computor, for me it is like trying to pick up pins in mittens
I like the way this flits from one thought to another. Almost dancing to the rhythm that you have created!
I like the "f" sounds throughout the poem. Is the line supposed to read "like a vagabond"? Just wondering. This is a fun poem.
Nicole-Yes dah'lin..mischievous thats me alright..hehe!
Ramchi-Such a sweet comment! makes me sigh too :)
Mermaid-Oh dear! Hope it was a nice kind of chaos, a cheery one :))
Transience-oh yea! oh yea!
Yo Jo!-yep its an imp alright, this life, so gotta grin n bear it..hugggs to u too!
Geetanjali-Guess wot! Its my fav one too..glad u liked it :)
Dez-Notty.knotty.naughty! Who needs a pill when life IS such a trip..all one needs is a French kiss ;)
Sue-Bang on! I couldn't agree more! I've drawn the pictures below with the 'paint' program, but I have also tried using 'Art Rage'..thats pretty cool..very close to the real thing, maybe u cd try that one :)
Agastya-Yea, it was kinda clippety- clop-clop that just popped :)Thanks!
Stan-Ahhh..no actually..i tried it metaphorically rather than make it a simile..tho' I realise its a bit quirky! lol! Glad u thot it was fun, it WAS gettin a bit dreary in here!
Thank you everybody for your fabulous comments my dears! Have a great weekend..cheers!
what a wonderful life! reminds me of that song by louis armstrong. :)
lovely poem!
french kissing eh? now you're talking
Gulnaz-Thanks dear! Its one of my most fav songs..blissful, isn't it :)
CJ-Ahhhh..a girl is entitled to her fantasies,eh?!! lol ;)
We all need more bliss in our lives. Thanks for sharing yours.
i love the way the words flowed. pretty.
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