Wednesday, April 20, 2005

A series of endings...

A wintry wetness
In the aftermath
Or a trail of memories
Slithering down the cheeks?
A garland of salty pearls
Tasted and wasted away
In vain waiting
As life gyrates
Into yet
Another
Twist…
---------
Come kiss me, once again….
as a torn tear hovers
uncertainly
On locked lashes
and the clock ticks
ominously
Marking yet another
end in nothing
but
A series of endings….
_____________________

9 Comments:

At 5:15 PM, Blogger Jyotsna said...

Sad and touched by nostalgia!touched me too.How are you Pin's?So good to see your post again.Missed you!
hugs ! :)

 
At 8:28 PM, Blogger G Shrivastava said...

Welcome back...

Loved the way you've described the series of endings - so tragic, so heart-breaking, it tugged at the strings of my heart!

 
At 11:35 AM, Blogger gulnaz said...

that was beautiful! good to see you back.
so many images weaved together in a string of emotion...'a series of endings'...the sadness is so paplpable.

 
At 6:43 PM, Blogger mermaid said...

This is painful, pincushion. Hey, I finally get the name. It's like I'm watching the same scene, only with different characters and dialogue. The pain is still the same.

 
At 6:54 PM, Blogger Adrian Neibauer said...

I love the way you focus on the physical. It is like you are zooming in on a single tear...like a well-directed scene.

Also, I love the play on words (torn tear). Well done.

welcome back.

 
At 4:27 AM, Blogger {illyria} said...

a series of endings means a series of beginnings! sometimes, starting over is a good thing. we can look forward to a lot of learnings and new adventures.

 
At 8:43 AM, Blogger S.L. Corsua said...

oh, an update! a poem! *eyes twinkling*

i am spellbound by these lines:

as a torn tear hovers
uncertainly

On locked lashes


powerful and feminine. ^_^

 
At 1:13 AM, Blogger . : A : . said...

I really like the term "wintry wetness" and the title.

 
At 11:16 AM, Blogger Innocent Bullet said...

Exquisite! :-)

 

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