A series of endings...
A wintry wetness
In the aftermath
Or a trail of memories
Slithering down the cheeks?
A garland of salty pearls
Tasted and wasted away
In vain waiting
As life gyrates
Into yet
Another
Twist…
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In the aftermath
Or a trail of memories
Slithering down the cheeks?
A garland of salty pearls
Tasted and wasted away
In vain waiting
As life gyrates
Into yet
Another
Twist…
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Come kiss me, once again….
as a torn tear hovers
uncertainly
as a torn tear hovers
uncertainly
On locked lashes
and the clock ticks
ominously
and the clock ticks
ominously
Marking yet another
end in nothing
but
end in nothing
but
A series of endings….
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posted by Pincushion @ 12:53 PM
9 comments
9 Comments:
Sad and touched by nostalgia!touched me too.How are you Pin's?So good to see your post again.Missed you!
hugs ! :)
Welcome back...
Loved the way you've described the series of endings - so tragic, so heart-breaking, it tugged at the strings of my heart!
that was beautiful! good to see you back.
so many images weaved together in a string of emotion...'a series of endings'...the sadness is so paplpable.
This is painful, pincushion. Hey, I finally get the name. It's like I'm watching the same scene, only with different characters and dialogue. The pain is still the same.
I love the way you focus on the physical. It is like you are zooming in on a single tear...like a well-directed scene.
Also, I love the play on words (torn tear). Well done.
welcome back.
a series of endings means a series of beginnings! sometimes, starting over is a good thing. we can look forward to a lot of learnings and new adventures.
oh, an update! a poem! *eyes twinkling*
i am spellbound by these lines:
as a torn tear hovers
uncertainly
On locked lashes
powerful and feminine. ^_^
I really like the term "wintry wetness" and the title.
Exquisite! :-)
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