Tuesday, March 08, 2005

Answers.

I don’t want you
does that mean
I don’t love you ?

Answers aren’t
meant to be simple
merely antithetical.

Shards of glass
piercing through
that’s peace

absent for you.

So for now
I am learning
trying to
let go of you.

11 Comments:

At 5:35 PM, Blogger mermaid said...

Ouch!!! This one hurt, and stung, and still pricks.

Are the cuts too deep, too permanent to heal?

 
At 6:38 PM, Blogger Pincushion said...

Ahhh..not if i can help it
Its time to let go :)
Cheers !

 
At 12:27 AM, Blogger {illyria} said...

letting go is probably the greatest testament of strength during these times. enlightening poem, pincushion.

 
At 4:36 AM, Blogger Jyotsna said...

Letting go-----yes probably the most important test of strength along with our willingness to allow our future to happen can create miracles..
strength and luck for u always
i identify with this and you know why :)

 
At 6:50 AM, Blogger aa said...

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At 6:53 AM, Blogger aa said...

I cannot resist, somehow it feels right to share this piece and know that you will not see it as an intrusion...

The saffron colored leaf
Anchored by the twig that held it
Close all summer
Let loose
And fell

Ever so gently
Into a majestic dance with the autumn breeze
Tipping and swaying to the rhythm
Of the whispering wind
Until it landed in the brown grass

And I understood then
It is not always the hanging on
But sometimes
It is
The letting go.

 
At 8:57 AM, Blogger Pincushion said...

This, is so beautiful ! As usual you have surpassed yourself and NO its not an intrusion, in fact i needed to hear this !

Thankyou for sharing this, thank you.

 
At 3:21 AM, Blogger . : A : . said...

'antithetical' ... The word in this poem keeps ringing again and again. Wonderful choice!

 
At 6:30 AM, Blogger G Shrivastava said...

It's a beautiful piece - and for some strange reason I can see a conenction between this and your last post (once again) - the words just suit that situation so well!

Every time I read it, I think of Pratik and his teacher...

 
At 6:08 PM, Blogger Innocent Bullet said...

In letting go lies the answer o wise one! heady, swirling, like a vortex sucking me in... :-)

 
At 10:37 PM, Blogger Adrian Neibauer said...

A single shard can hurt the most.
Well written...through experience, no doubt.

 

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