Monday, February 21, 2005

Soul silence....

...and then...

those moments
trickled by
in little droplets
of pure pleasure
when
sliding through
tricky time
your lips
became mine

...fragmenting....
the imprints
of love are
now here
though
long gone
leaving a
trembling trail
of melody
a symphony
of melting bodies

...fracturing....

only
the

soul silence
of memories
now

...gathering.....

6 Comments:

At 2:52 PM, Blogger Anil said...

"...a symphony of melting bodies..." loved that line and the beautiful image it conjures...

 
At 4:18 PM, Blogger SPECKLED_BAND said...

You are on the unstoppable ascendant, Pincushion! LOVELY POEM AGAIN!

 
At 4:20 PM, Blogger mermaid said...

OK, the most amazing thing about this one is the contrast and connection of the end:

'...fracturing....

only
the
soul silence
of memories
now

...gathering..... '

I am reminded of a splintered heart in pieces now gathering.

Your last few poems seem to be songs of loss. If this person only knew what they were missing.

 
At 5:23 AM, Blogger Jyotsna said...

What can i say Pins to this??
"only the soul silence of memories
now..gathering"...you know how i feel about this..beautiful usage of words here..

 
At 1:20 PM, Blogger Aradhita said...

A very sated silence indeed!
btw, read u at caferati too.
cya,
Aradhita

 
At 3:41 AM, Blogger Innocent Bullet said...

and spellbound again :-))

 

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