Wednesday, August 03, 2005

Manic Monsoon!

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A filtered haze of
grey and blue
As I drenched
in you.....

The cravings
eddying
Flooded with pools
of you....

Awashed bodies
and garbage
bodies are garbage
too....(?)

A remembered
flurry of
You and I
washed away

But why then
does my skin
still ooze....

With the thought
of a monsoon
you..... (??)


12 Comments:

At 10:22 AM, Blogger Jyotsna said...

Welcome to Mumbai..a rainy one albeit :)

 
At 11:09 AM, Blogger Anil said...

what a beautiful blue...you evoked monsoon very well....loved the painting and the words....

 
At 3:00 PM, Blogger {illyria} said...

i adore the sketchy blue. as always, your hand guides the words.

 
At 7:48 PM, Blogger Lorena said...

what rich colors and rich words.
love the blue & how it sticks out in your painting and in your words.
lovely.

 
At 9:19 PM, Blogger mermaid said...

Ditto, Lorena's words.

Liked the simile of bodies and garbage...it strikes such a dissonant note in the melancholy music of the mad rain.

 
At 1:07 PM, Blogger small squirrel said...

ayeeeeeeeeee!
I hope everything is alright with you im mumbai. I was worried for you for sure... the news in bangalore was bad. we were just fine, thankfully.

I am miserable to be home.

do have fun. and ahhhhhhh. the monsoons. when they are not causing havoc they are soooooo gorgeous.

 
At 12:55 AM, Blogger Adrian Neibauer said...

So, that's what you look like! It is always nice to put a face to a name...or pseudonym for that matter.

 
At 2:43 PM, Blogger Russell CJ Duffy said...

gorgeous pic. gorgeous words. hope that you are ok im Mumbai?

 
At 1:35 AM, Blogger Russell Ragsdale said...

Loved that poem Pins! Fantastic!

 
At 9:58 PM, Blogger Martin said...

wow your art never fails to astound me.

Beautiful!

- Martin

 
At 6:39 PM, Blogger gulnaz said...

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At 6:41 PM, Blogger gulnaz said...

the blue sketch is soo pretty and the words too! my favourites are the last 2 stanzas. the deluge was awful!!!
so many ppl have lost so much, shudder at the thought.

 

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