By my side (55 word poem)
You with me,
A child
picking up pebbles,
hunting four leaf clovers,
running along primrose paths,
licking lemons sitting on doorsteps,
You with me,
A youth
in a restaurant full of people,
gazing into my eyes as I gazed back
at life aromatic with pain and strife,
Loneliness so faithful,
You’re always by my side......
55 word poem
(The 55-word poem idea is English-August's
the link to which is posted in the title)
Link
posted by Pincushion @ 8:52 AM
13 comments
13 Comments:
i love your use of everyday scenery here, pincushion! makes the poem pretty and grounded.
Lovely imagery and moments in this one. Have added it to the list.
Do you want to add the tag - 55 word poem
I feel like a snooker ball that is boucing around and off the 55 cushion of blogging fashion.
clever stuff Pins.
And wat do u know...this Girl can WRITE TOO:)
Nice.
Reminds me of Marcy Playground's first album. Do listen if you can get your hands on it.
You know what I love about this 55 word poem? Though you meet the 55 word criterion, you shape the verses with your own form.
Trans-Thanks! but could have been better for sure!
Agastya-Thanks! Yep, did add the tag :)
CJ-Clever? donno really! but had go anyways, lol!
Arvind-I am glad to find out you think so ;)!!
Mermaid-Ahh, I tried! But i'm afraid am not too happy with it! Thanks for the words of encouragement!
Ramchi-You are always so generous with your kind words! Thank you :)
Wonderwall-I sure will make it a point! Thanks :)
This is simple yet so beautiful!
i like the observations here. very warm and tender and honest.
very sweet poem.
55 words
this is cool
i will give it whirl mysef soon . . .
Poingnat twist, beautifly done Pins! I liked his a lot, the theme is fantastic too!
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