Distant.
Sat sipping sunshine
weakened warmth
filtering away....
A lonely red leaf
twirled an
autumn tune....
I sat on it
and blew away
a distant love....
Just a winter away.
posted by Pincushion @ 3:01 PM
19 comments
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Thursday, September 15, 2005
weakened warmth
filtering away....
A lonely red leaf
twirled an
autumn tune....
I sat on it
and blew away
a distant love....
Just a winter away.
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19 Comments:
Nostalgia,longing and the yearning--so plentiful in this verse.I could feel what you were feeling!
To float away to summer on a leaf, beautiful immage
oooh..."weakened warmth filtering away"...how wonderfully expressed...
lovely poem...
"and blew away a distant love".
That was my favorite part, probably because I think nature holds so many of our imprints and memories, especially in the veins of leaves...hey, I think I feel a poem coming...
this moment you describe seems so peaceful and that is how it is sometimes when you are letting go of a distant love.
beautiful.
Beautiful and delicate verse here.
Lyrical, sweet yet tugged at those strings!
Great post as always.
Just noticed your profile pic...looking good!
great first line...it is vivid and poetic and beautiful and simple.
wow... I loved the first stanza especially...the duality, a season leaving, the warmth of a distant love gone...hmmm... simple and lovely
"A lonely red leaf
twirled an
autumn tune...."
the music of nature, so well described!
such sweet aching melancholy. do it again!!!
i love how your last verse resonated with me.
The bloody rhythm.
Jo-Ahhh we are alter-egos! :))
Sue, Fem-I am so glad you liked it! Thank you :)
Mermaid-Yes, nature is poetry itself! Ahh...let it be born, your poem! :)
Lorena, Agastya-Thank you!
Finns- Nothing wrong with being Different ;)tho' my sympathies DO lie with the cat!
Geetanjali, IdeaSmith-Thank you! Glad you liked it :)
Small sqirrel-Yes, it nature is full of duality, isn't it?
Rachel Ann-Welcome back! Thank you :)
Brood Mode-Welcome aboard! Glad you liked the music! Thank you :)
CJ-Oh! I sure will ;)
Ramchi-Gosh! You DO add to my knowledge of movies :)Thanks!
Transience-Resonate..I do so love that word! :)
Finns-Welcome back :))
Ubermensch-Rhythm! Such possibilities there ;)
beautiful
a perfect match for my mood today
thank you
Great to have you here Floots! Have seen u around at CJ's :)
Glad you liked it, thank you too :)
Just a winter away. That's a long time isn't it?
This is surreal and beautiful. Exquisite imagery! Where have you been beautiful lady? :-)
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