Dusk.
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posted by Pincushion @ 5:03 PM
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21 Comments:
I like the effect of words caught between the silver shadows of the skies, and drenched by the rain.
Oh! Pincushion
I was thinking all these while
"Pinch-Cushion" - anyways... great blog. Keep up...
Few words for you
Pinch my Cushion
Pinch my dreams
I want to wake up
I want the sheens
I am trapped in the dark
Reach the mark
Pinch my Senses
Pinch my illusions
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nicely done
lovely facad
lovely
lonely
Okkkkkk Fine !! what are u waiting for? Stand up and fill the gap. Clouds dont remain at one place like beds. Wish u luck.
Oh Pins, this one aches with a sense of parted love and loneliness. And the background is a wash with the blues which is very fitting.
This is really beautiful! The ache so palpable it hurts while reading.
:)
beautiful background for the words. it's fluid like your words.
The visual appeal of the backdrop does a great deal for the lovely ache in your verse.
That was lovely. :-)
Wonderful words meant to be whispered in the dark, at the onset of winter Ps word veryfercation is having a zed day
Well everyone has already said anything I could think of - so I shall settle for a rather inane comment " Quite dusky ;-)"
Fabulous as always - loved the velvety feel of the backdrop!
Love the choice of the background. It adds so much 'mood' to the poem.
WOw...Never ever have I seen the feelin of DUSK projected this breathtakingly beautiful..
Just curious...DO you sell ur stuff?:)
Mermaid-'silver shadows'! I love the way you come up with these effortless phrases! Thanks :)
Rama-..spaces being multilayered almost has a metaphysical feel to it! You too made me think :))
Human-Thank you for the very interesting poem! I am honoured *bows* thank you :))
Blog this-'lovely lonely', How apt!! Thank you :)
Yvaine-Loved the way you described the blue backgroud! Yes, I am a very visual person, thanks :))
Lotus-Welcome aboard! Thank you for your kind words! Do leave me a link to your blog, would love to visit! :)
CJ-You are always so perceptive! Thank you my dear! :))
Blue Athena-You are very sensitive! Thank you :)
Lorena-Ahhh fluid! When I painted it, I had hoped it would be! Thank you so much for saying that :))
Extempore-Welcome aboard! Hope to see you often! Glad you liked my painting :)) Thank you!
Sue-ahhh yes, whispered darkness does things ;)..and 'veryfercation' has connotations! lol! :))
Geetanjali-oooooh..'quite dusky' is real gooood! :)) thanks!
Agastya-I had hoped to catch the 'mood' when i painted it! The sky outside my window looked a bit like this! Thanks :)
Arvind-Thank you!! sell...ahhh sure would love to..but where are the buyers?!! am just an impoverished struggler! :))
Absolutely true _ the whole scribbling was inspired by the robert frost poem. Esp the line in that poem - i choose the path that were less travelled.
Keeping his poem and sytle beside , i tried to scribble. ANd i agree with yours and symta as there is no end as at the end a new one starts. And thatz why ,, a traveller can never stop walking - he will keep walking till his grave and at his grave a new traveller will start in a different form.
One short story may end
at the end of one
another may begin.
Story never ends.
hey.. thank you for dropping by.. I enjoy your comments and you give me a latteral thinking of my crazy thinking.
vaishnav
Such sensitive words.
These are the kind of words that transport one to where they were when this too happened in their lives.
I went back.
I'm happy that they are just words for me now.
Beautifully written.
Long time since i read/saw something as beautiful as that!
lovely words, stunning backdrop. keep it up! btw, i recently wrote a poem on Dusk as well and will share it with you if u wish
Very nice.
The second line tells a story. There's so much music you should listen to!
Known Stranger-You scribbled rather well :)..and your thinking is absolutely sensible, not crazy at all! :))
Queen-Thank you for droppin by! I am happy too for you! :)
J-Welcome aboard! Thank you for the kind words :))
Shubhodeep-Of course I'd love to read your poem on 'Dusk'! Its always a pleasure :)
Wonderwall-Ahhh..perhaps The Blues would be apt!! Thanks :)
The background colours are my favourites. Their pattern and colours compliment the fluidity of your lovely words! This is my first visit here but I'll be back. I've seen your comments on many other writing sites I've recently discovered.
Silvermoon-Lovely to have you here! Will look forward to your visits. Thank you for your kind words and helping me discover you :))
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