Dusk.
Drizzling eyes, heavy skies
sighing shadows and
lengthening nights....
Words unspoken in empty
conversations, jostling with
silent spaces lying across
empty beds....
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10 Comments:
I like the effect of words caught between the silver shadows of the skies, and drenched by the rain.
lengthening ki spelling kyon ghalat hai? Aur aaj kal na koi salaam na payaam? Kya ho raha hai? :-))
Four dots and not an ellipse? :-)
Loved it all the same.
Sadness so apparent in your words.....
((hugs))
Between satin sheets of dusk
.....lovely :)
ditto my comment on the picture comments.
lovely poem. it flows so sweetly :)
Words unspokedn in empty
conversation, jostling with
silent spaces lying across
empty beds....
awake whole dark with tears
with heart full of emotions.
vaishnav
Finns-Just the on set of winter I guess! But will be back with a cheery bang ;)!!
Dan-Thanks for pointing out the typo Danji! Corrected it right away..aur I wish kucch ho raha hota, lol!!
Heretic-How about four dots and a tangent! Thats my life in a nutshell!
JO-Ahhh..but YOU never fail to cheer me up by your presence! Huggs u back! :))
Nicole-oooh, you make it sound so sensuous..'satin sheets of dusk'!! :))
Known stranger-Very very poignant,,these words of yours! Thank you :))
Mermaid, Lorena, CJ-Thank you! :))
noted
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