Sunday, November 13, 2005

Dusk.

Drizzling eyes, heavy skies
sighing shadows and
lengthening nights....

Words unspoken in empty
conversations, jostling with
silent spaces lying across
empty beds....

10 Comments:

At 5:08 PM, Blogger mermaid said...

I like the effect of words caught between the silver shadows of the skies, and drenched by the rain.

 
At 2:59 AM, Blogger Innocent Bullet said...

lengthening ki spelling kyon ghalat hai? Aur aaj kal na koi salaam na payaam? Kya ho raha hai? :-))

 
At 7:53 AM, Blogger heretic said...

Four dots and not an ellipse? :-)
Loved it all the same.

 
At 8:02 AM, Blogger Jyotsna said...

Sadness so apparent in your words.....
((hugs))

 
At 4:13 PM, Blogger Nicole Braganza said...

Between satin sheets of dusk

.....lovely :)

 
At 1:42 PM, Blogger Russell CJ Duffy said...

ditto my comment on the picture comments.

 
At 10:38 PM, Blogger Lorena said...

lovely poem. it flows so sweetly :)

 
At 2:11 PM, Blogger Known Stranger said...

Words unspokedn in empty
conversation, jostling with
silent spaces lying across
empty beds....

awake whole dark with tears
with heart full of emotions.

vaishnav

 
At 5:26 PM, Blogger Pincushion said...

Finns-Just the on set of winter I guess! But will be back with a cheery bang ;)!!

Dan-Thanks for pointing out the typo Danji! Corrected it right away..aur I wish kucch ho raha hota, lol!!

Heretic-How about four dots and a tangent! Thats my life in a nutshell!

JO-Ahhh..but YOU never fail to cheer me up by your presence! Huggs u back! :))

Nicole-oooh, you make it sound so sensuous..'satin sheets of dusk'!! :))

Known stranger-Very very poignant,,these words of yours! Thank you :))

Mermaid, Lorena, CJ-Thank you! :))

 
At 8:02 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

noted

 

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