Her soliloquy:
Shredded bits of paper with torn stories, thy name is life.
The one bedrock of my certainty proved to be a waxy candle, burnt down. What do I hold on to now? My dreams wail a betrayal that I cannot articulate. But I have no one to blame but myself! Me the architect of morbid messes.
Transparency eludes me at this point and life is just another name for opaqueness. Sentences in the past tense, float in the breeze along with your name. If I could delineate every word into letters of wanting, perhaps it would all fall apart whilst trying to come together?
I spin tales of solitude and soliloquies abound at this moment. Music is a duet of solace and distress. All I need now is to dance this dance and when I come crashing down, I know there won't be any arms.
But I shall go on.
posted by Pincushion @ 9:59 AM
14 comments
14 Comments:
when i come crashing down
i know there won't be any arms
a sad but powerful image
i'm about to drive through a stormswept landscape
i will take that image with me
thank you
We we're all dropped on our heads as babies, and continue to bang our heads on the wall! Good piece of writing!!
Lovely post! the saddening reality, but the glorius acceptance.. wonderful!
Let the dance continue through autumn...and finally when you crash it might be on a spring fresh bed of roses:):)
Are you sure there won't be any arms, Pins?
One of the hardest lessons I am learning (and still trying to ignore), is that the only comfort I really have are these arms.
Loved the soliloquy. Sad but honest. It's difficult to escape from loneliness. Find me one who can, and I'll bet the magic act will be short-lived.
Daaaaaamn! When you got friends who know which tunes to play on("Kajra Re" sound good ?),no matter how many times you fall, you will always get up knowing there are arms waiting to lift u and dance with u!
Floots-stormswept landscape?!! sounds and looks familiar to me...:)
Pat-we sure continue to do that! thank u :)
Freakx-Welcome aboard, lookin fwd to seeing you here often! thank u :)
Anamika-What a lovely thought, bed of roses! I shall look fwd to that!..thank u :)
Mermaid-Yes magic acts are just that! Some last longer than others, thats all but there is always life beyond them! Thanks :)
Rama-Awwww..thats so sweet! I sure like the sound of that! Thank you my dear friend :)
I absolutely love this!!! especially this image here:
"Sentences in the past tense, float in the breeze along with your name."
beautiful. (the writing but not the feeling)
life goes on they say. and it's hard to believe but out there is another person who will rock your world, just keep those eyes open as well as your heart.
(i'm all caught up now. i haven't put as much time to blogging lately. thanks for dropping by :)
Truly, truly lovely! And very moving!
:)
JJ.
This is so sad , the last line hits you like a stone.
Lorena-Thank YOU for droppin by and all the lovely thoughts you've sprinkled around..hope life is treating you well! :)
JJ-So glad to see you here, your words are greatly valued..:)
Sue-Ahhh yes, it does sound a bit morbid..I must rectify that asap! :))
beautifully expressed.
"But I shall go on." - i just love this optimism.
hey girl, dance into these arms. i have two left feet but...
JJ-Dance into your arms..WoW! I must be in heave..;)..two left feet or not!
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