Wine & cigarettes!
I drink you
in
With every sip
Alas
you aren’t
Here
To see
how I bleed
you
in my
blood stream
-------------------------
how I bleed
you
in my
blood stream
-------------------------
You spiral me away
With every puff
All that remains
Of me
now
Is the stub
That you grind
Under your heel
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Frozen sparkling tears
Drying on silken webs
Of lashes….
Scattered reflections
Of shattered loving
In flashes…
Murmured whispers
Trailing on lips
Now silenced.
Now bring on
the
wine and cigarettes
killing off
bits
of
myself
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posted by Pincushion @ 9:05 AM
15 comments
15 Comments:
Sad,poignant and i could feel the underlying sense of helpess anger..
hugs
:)
Incrredibly well said my dear - combined with the image above it is brilliant!
PS Vis-a-vis the post below, I could feel the pain with every word I read...sometimes the pain gets really unbearable doesn't it? I wish you well...always!
Ouch!!! Brilliant, nonetheless. I think of all the patients I see with health problems multiply after a life change. Discontent in any relationship can drive us to seek comfort in the most destructive things.
Mine is chocolate.
poignant and bitter....yet so beautifully expressed.
Oh Cushion
This is so unlike you...may you be in peace ...may the colours and beauty you bestow on us fill your life.
Hugs...
all that was needed to be said has been said. Now is rested.
Jo-I do sound horrid, don't I, lol! Hugs :)
Geetanjali-Yes, my dear, it does..but hopefully the pain will be a motivation to DO something about the situation! Thank u for ur wishes my dear, I am really touched..wish you the same :)
Mermaid-Ouch yes! as for chocolates, droool..i can never get enuf of them! My vices just keep multiplying, dont they!! *grins*
Illusion-Welcome aboard! :))..glad you liked it, but hey its just a poem and not me, lol! hope to see more of you here! thank u:)
Anamika-You come across as such a sweet person :) thank you for all those lovely wishes! Huggs :)
Uber-Yes, Now is rested! Its good to have you back here after a long time :)
Finns-It just got better ;) Cheers!!
loved the way in whch you combine
the emotional and spiritual
with the mundane
and somehow add to each
I kill myself silently everyhour by the hour....
nice one this and the pic above and thanks for visiting and commenting on my blog appreciate it;
cheers
z
Madelyn-Thank you! :)
Floots-Wow! *bows*deeply honoured!
Zofo-My pleasure! Always respect a Hermit! :))
Silvermoon-You are very perceptive and have the heart of an artist..sensitive and caring! *Huggs you back* Your huggs have worked wonders..thank you, my dear :)
Pain can birth the best of poems and art. I read that somewhere. Your art and poetry feed the mind.
Pat-Welcome aboard! I am honoured that you think so! Thank you for the visit and I hope to see you around more :)
i like the imagery here:
"All that remains
Of me
now
Is the stub
That you grind
Under your heel"
strong words! a lot of emotion.
i love it!
Lorena-*Bows*Thank u :)
Lena-Welcome aboard, my dear! Of course, it'll be ok if you visited again, in fact it would be a pleasure. thank you! :)
very instense and despairing. I really loved it. Keep up the good work. Nice stuff here indeed!
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